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LMN Mystery/Thriller/Drama Pitch: "An Invitation to Trouble" (For Stephanie Bennett on Her Birthday)


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2 hours ago, Cheerleader Vicky said:

Shouldn't she have more of a reason than just a place to stay? Like, maybe the family assumes she is applying for a nanny position and she goes with it.

I believe that would work for sure.

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6 hours ago, Angie said:

I feel like there is more to this.

Indeed there is. The amnesiac woman in question is actually a member of the gang who's hunting her. This is because when she had her full memory, she becomes fed up with their way of life and decides to quit, leading to a brief scuffle that allows her to make a run for it. Along the way, she trips over a piece of metal and gets knocked out, causing her amnesia. Also, the "gossiper" is the true main antagonist of the story, hiding out and giving orders to the gang in secret.

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